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THE MEMORY BOX

THE MEMORY BOX

A memory box was found in an atticĀ 
dusty and forgotten through the years
It heldĀ so many memories
some were happy times, some broughtĀ tears
There were photographs turning sepia
torn and tattered, through Ā ageĀ 
There were letters tied up in red bowed
ribbon, tears stainedĀ the page
Ā 
They told of a great love affair
of a lady of Ā great renown
And also of a gentlemanĀ a spiff
what you`d call,Ā a manĀ about town
The letters recalled Ā the lovers trysts
down beside,Ā an old willow tree
But theseĀ clandestine meetings were wrong
because the lady was not free

You see she had a husband but he
was a drunk, a bully a cad
But two children she had given himĀ 
these the most precious gifts, she had
Her lover wanted them to run awayĀ 
for them to be together
But onlyĀ her he wanted Ā her children
had to stay, was written in one letter

The affair lasted many years
fifty lettersĀ the lady keptĀ 
In theĀ last letterĀ the gentlemanĀ ended
it, the reader thought of her bereft
So all was left was this memory box in an attic
it was this Ā lady`s treasure
Holding memories of a great love affair
memoriesĀ that would last, foreverĀ 
Ā 

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Mizzy ......

Very interesting write Deborah....sounds true, Ā not fictional. Very well narrated !Ā 

Regards Mick.

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Deborah Evans

Hi Ā Mick I watched a film called The Memory Box
totally different story but i liked the idea of a memory boxĀ 
and went from thereĀ 
Thank you for your kind comment always appreciated
Merry Christmas and best wishes DebsĀ 

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Tony Taylor

Hey DEBS!!...... this was such a great narrative...... filled with creativity....... and compelling storytelling that was so charming.....I found myself smiling all the way through........ regardless of whether or not it was built from reality......... the simplistic, inviting, honesty of it......was pure magic!!......ALL STARS!!......a great read sweet poetess!!........ BEAUTIFULLYĀ deliveredĀ !!........ LOVE and ROCKETS!!.......T xo.Ā  ?Ā 

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Deborah Evans

Hi Ā Tony Ā Glad you enjoyed this oneĀ 
I enjoyed writing it Only a title IĀ had
so justĀ imaginationĀ 
Thank you for your lovely commentsĀ 
always appreciatedĀ 
Merry Christmas my friendĀ 
Love n hugs Debs xo

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Rose Sho

This is a beautiful soty Debs...I'm glad I caught it...Thanks for sharing

Lots of love

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Deborah Evans

Hi Ā Sweet Rose i`m glad you enjoyed this oneĀ 
Thank you for your kind commentsĀ 
Merry Christmas dear friend
Lots of love DebsĀ 
Ā 

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Larry Ran

Hi Dear Debs,

This sacred Memory Box, letters from the past about a woman torn in half. Ā Her husband, self-serving, uncaring, unfulfilling, yet, the father of her two Children. Ā Her lover, everything she ever dreamt of for her Prince Charming, taking her on fugues of ecstasy. Ā "Run away with me", he said. Ā "I have two Children", said she. Ā "Leave them with their father and only be with me". Ā "Never could I do that", was her reply, "And since you cannot love them, I have to say goodbye".

Hugs, Peace and Love,

Larry xxx

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Deborah Evans

Hi Ā Larry Exactly right Ā A lovely description
of my writeĀ 
Thank you my friendĀ 
Love n Hugs Debs xox

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Jai Masters

A true story written with poetic poise Debs;Ā 

beautifully written.Ā 

Luv Jai:)Ā 

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Deborah Evans

Hi Jai Sorry so long getting back to youĀ 
Thank you for your kind words
and for supporting my work in 2016
Happy New year to you my friendĀ 
Love n hugs Debs xĀ 
Ā 

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