The Meraki Wanderlust
Bittersweet breeze
Cascaded by me with gentle ease
A tumbleweed blows past the thoughts in my mind
I find myself falling behind
With laughter and cheer
It's all I can hear
Shimmering citrine
Coalesced with dainty smiles and red wine
The ferocious glare of a tigers eye
Suddenly I'm propelled up high
A crowd of thousands gasp with terror
Instantly believing I'd made an error
Present day too
Skies of cerulean blue
In foreign fields of juniper leaves
Enveloped by my woollen sleeves
It doesn't add up
It won't make sense
My teacher yells
And to my defense;
My creation
Generates an invitation
To the encounters of true adventure
Of which I can't surrender
An invitation
To the revelation
Of the inner beauty of my utmost destination
You see
You can make discoveries every day
Just let your mind take you away
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Hello Hannah Mae...
Great first submission...
Welcome to Cosmo!
Hugs...
sparrowsong
Thankyou my lovely!! Feedback appreciated :)
Hi Hannah really enjoyed this poem lovely
imaginary ... Best wishes Debs
Thankyou Deborah!! Thankful for your critique :)
Hi Poetess Hannah Mae,
Our trust is fundamental for the process of creating reality. You need first of all to trust in the voice of your beloved one. This voice is telling you the truth. Write it first, and chew it slowly, practice your theme of your life and love and over and over, great write, keep pouring more and more,
I love the below lines:
Regards
Willy
Willy, kind regards!! I am incredibly overwhelmed by such kind words and wisdom. Highly appreciated. Thankyou, Hannah.
Hi Hannah,
What a superbly written work. Such depth. Such passion. A real gem. I love it. Welcome to Cosmo!
Peace and Love,
xox Larry