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The Night

The Night

As the night rides in
firstly in a stately trot, then picking up the pace,
the Β stars, in gratitude, ignite the darkening backcloth.
Each pinprick of light, a promise of a future still distantly seen.
The light of day slowly rests her head on the distant horizon.
Hypnotic in her lessening.
Monochrome covers all the once vibrant life, teeming and jostling for recognition
Now all becomes willingly equal.....one
As the darkness falls, I feel a flame of brilliance ignite itself within my core,
the shabby day replaced slowly by this unifying element.
We all become anonymous, hidden from clear sightΒ 
Anyone we wish to be..dream of being..need to be.
To feel impervious to harm whilst cradled within the pitch blackness
this magical cloak of protection, no one can touch or reach me...
A limited reprieve.... until the dawn.

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Tony Taylor

Hi LODIGIANA!!......this is VERY well crafted...... some seriously choice phrasing contributing to this truly compelling piece of lovely darkness!!....... Isn't it interesting how personalities change during "The Night"....... how many of us feel we can do things unseen undercover of "The Night"....... you've touched on something VERY special here dear poet sister!!.......ALL STARS!!.....smokin' grooves girlfriend!!......LOVE & ROCKETS!!......T xo ??✴?✴?

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lodigiana

Hi Tony! Β Night is always a mystery but one we can be part of I believe! Maybe we have hidden thoughts and desires we only feel free to voice under cover of the duskiness of night....always love your comments and insight my brother which always come from such a god place within you! ..thank you so much xx

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KIERAN1369

Hi LodigianaΒ 

A sweet poem written by a sweet ladyΒ 

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lodigiana

Aw Kieran what a kind thing to say..thank you sir! xxx

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Nigel Cresswell...

Lovely Lodigiana, both poems. Exactly how I feel at night. Love it and pinned for future enjoyment
Nigel

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lodigiana

Thank you so much Nigel..It really is surprising howΒ  many of us seem to prefer the night..do you thing it is a 'poet' thing maybe?...
Lodigiana xx

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sarah harry

nicely pennedΒ 
the atmosphere always seem to bring comfort...isn't that ironic though,seeking comfort in the darkness...?

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