Poem -
THE NIGHTMARE
I
WENT
TO
SLEEP
LAST
NIGHT
HAD
A
NIGHTMARE
ABOUT
WINTER
STORM
THERE
WAS
SINGER
AND
A
PIANO
PLAYER
I
TRYED
AND
TRYED
TO
WAKE
UP
BUT
THE
FORCE
KEPT
PULLING
ME
IN
AND
THEN
THE
STORM
GOT
WORSE
AND
I WOKE
UP
AND
I
WAS
SHAKING
THE
NIGHTMARE
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Comments
Brilliant Greg, sheer brilliance. Beautifully well written and your presentation is a joy to behold.
Your writing delivers the night terrors in spades and your construction adds to it, building it up even more.
Five worthy stars ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ and quickly pinned as well.
This type of poetry is called concrete poetry and rarely seen.
Thank you Greg and simply enjoy poetry and life and all the good they can both bestow..
Shaun I didnt know this kind is called concrete poetry! I'm still learning myself! But its definately a style I have been doing without even knowing what it's called!! From my most recent ones...soulful bliss and unravelling. Thanks for the info!! And I'll be catching up with your writes soon! Px
Wowsas Greg sooo good 💙💕💙⭐️
Thank you Jill
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❤️❤️❤️❤️
Omg Greg I love this!! Its awesome! Great write!! Ssoo pinned!! Px
Thank you Pratibha I wrote this earlier today but video video I didn’t have one letter to it so I went back again to YouTube yeah and I found a video and I saw that I had one water that I didn’t put in So I wrote the way I did it Then I read it back to myself after I put it in going back in and put something added to it
GREG!!......I can tell you put SO MUCH work into this piece.....and hard work ALWAYS pays off........The choice you made for this video was truly inspired ~ A perfect touch dear poet brother!!......helping to add to the poem's tone and overall effect ~
~ "The Force kept pulling me in......"
Bravo brother....definitely one of my favorite GREG poems!!.....ALL STARS!!.......LOVE & ROCKETS!!........T xo : )
Thank you Tony I wrote this twice the first time I couldn’t get the video to work and the second time I came back got the video to work and after I wrote it I looked over that mmm i’m going to add to it Force kept pulling me in Thank you so much for reading