Poem -

THE NIGHTMARE

 I
   WENT 
           TO
SLEEP 
         LAST 
NIGHT 
         HAD 
A
    NIGHTMARE
ABOUT 
           WINTER
STORM 
           THERE
WAS 
       SINGER
AND  
       A 
PIANO 
         PLAYER

   TRYED 
AND 
       TRYED 
TO 
WAKE 
        UP
     BUT
          THE
      FORCE
                KEPT
     PULLING
                  ME
      IN
AND 
     THEN 
THE 
     STORM 
GOT 
     WORSE 
AND 
     I WOKE 
UP 
    AND 
  I
         WAS 
SHAKING
 THE
NIGHTMARE
   
 

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Shaun Cronick

Brilliant Greg, sheer brilliance. Beautifully well written and your presentation is a joy to behold.
Your writing  delivers the night terrors in spades and your construction adds to it, building it up even more.
Five worthy stars ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ and quickly pinned as well.
This type of poetry is called concrete poetry and rarely seen.
Thank you Greg and simply enjoy poetry and life and all the good they can both bestow..
 

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Pratibha Savani

Shaun I didnt know this kind is called concrete poetry! I'm still learning myself! But its definately a style I have been doing without even knowing what it's called!! From my most recent ones...soulful bliss and unravelling. Thanks for the info!! And I'll be catching up with your writes soon! Px

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Jill Tait

Wowsas Greg sooo good 💙💕💙⭐️

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Pratibha Savani

Omg Greg I love this!! Its awesome! Great write!! Ssoo pinned!! Px

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Greg Etsell

Thank you Pratibha I wrote this earlier today but video video I didn’t have one letter to it so I went back again to YouTube yeah and I found a video and I saw that I had one water that I didn’t put in So I wrote the way I did it Then I read it back to myself after I put it in going back in and put something added to it

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Tony Taylor

GREG!!......I can tell you put SO MUCH work into this piece.....and hard work ALWAYS pays off........The choice you made for this video was truly inspired ~ A perfect touch dear poet brother!!......helping to add to the poem's tone and overall effect ~

                              ~ "The Force kept pulling me in......"

Bravo brother....definitely one of my favorite GREG poems!!.....ALL STARS!!.......LOVE & ROCKETS!!........T xo   : )

 

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Greg Etsell

Thank you Tony I wrote this twice the first time I couldn’t get the video to work and the second time I came back got the video to work and after I wrote it I looked over that mmm i’m going to add to  it Force kept pulling me in Thank you so much for reading

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