Poem -

The Ocean

The Ocean

Perpetual sapphire immense and unique,
Unassailable saline, wonderous blue deep.
Shimmering waves of delicate notion,
Staggering in grandeur, rhythmic in motion.

Copious with time, such beauty astounds,
Orchestra of entities in darkness profound.
Sonorous with life under twilight aglow,
Silhouette of giants swim delicately below.

Marine algae swept aside with the tide,
Waves crash steadily onto to silver shores.
Flounder and coral vibrant in sight,
Surreal mass of beasts sweeps the ocean floor.

Blue whales in verse in personified tune,
Unfettered plethora in magical bloom.

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Simon Bromley

Thank you very much for your nice comments. Β I am beginning to understand this website and realise that you cannot please everybody but for those that enjoy whatever we write, well that's why we do it isn't it.

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Tony Taylor

STUNNINIGLY powerful imagery here my friend.....made possible by the poetic use of unbelievably creative and well placed word choices!!.....you have such a stellar gift for painting vivid pictures in the minds eye of the reader!!......I had to PIN this SIR BROMLEY!!......excellent work!!......LOVE & ROCKETS!!......T xo πŸ‘Œβœ΄β€ ~ Bravo!! πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

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Simon Bromley

Thank you also for your very kind words. Β It was really hard to write with my little girl pestering me every two seconds. Β What's that and what's that ha ha. Β Thank you my friend.

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charlotte

really VERY LOVELY  from start to end your wording is BEAUTIFUL .. i had to pin this 😊

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