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THE OLD COAL MINER

THE OLD COAL MINER

I stand here on the stage and take a page from my life, When I was little girl  I sit by the radio and listen to my grandma sing about her daddy the old coal miner,She said he worked all night in mines and work all day on the farm, When I was a young woman I would go out to my grandmas house and sit on the porch and grandma would talk about her daddy the old coal miner, She said he would sit on the porch at night and talk about the farm and the war sing a hymn or two and read the bible by the coal oil light,The old coal miner is gone but the song is still sung today and her memories still lives on, The old coal miner,

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Rose Sho

Beautiful memories live on even when the person is gone...Nice write Greg

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Leah Yodico

Hi Greg,  Cherrie is absolutely right ## This is an awesome narrative poem ## and sounds like music ## Cherie has a golden heart to suggest the formatting. 

​​​​​​xoxo 
Leah 

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Greg Etsell

Thank you so much Leah for reading And yes Cherie is  a big help

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Larry Ran

Dear Greg,

"The Old Coal Miner", an anomaly, for so many die young from the Black Lung Disease.  
But this one lives forever in a song.
Very sweet and sentimental write.

Peace and Love,
Larry xxx

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Greg Etsell

Thank you Larry to tell you I sent this on to Tayla Lynn I haven't heard from her yet she so busy I may not hear from her, she is granddaughter of Loretta Lynn and I am big fan of both  this song  is about Tayla Lynn growing up

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Jill Tait

Awww lovely story and song Greg ❤️💜❤️

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Greg Etsell

Thank you Jill at the time I sent this to Tyler Lynn she is a country singer granddaughter to Larreta lynn But I never heard anything from them

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Jill Tait

❤️💙❤️

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