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THE OLD SHEPHARD

THE OLD  SHEPHARD

The old shephard wondering through the desert and the old hills with his sheep and his dogs, He sees the light in the mountains but keeps on going THEN!!! the north wind starts to blow and whispers in his ears and THEN!!! gets a tap on his shoulder he truns and sees a old woman dressed in black he says what do you want she points to the mountains the shephard says I MUST!!!  take my sheep home and see my wife,The shephard truns and walks toward home,THEN!!!! the light gets brighter THEN!!! theres tap on this shoulder he stops and truns around and see a old man dressed in white and shephard says what do you want,The old man points to the mountains and the shephard say I MUST!!!! take my sheep home and see my wife then he truns toward home,Then the rain and the wind come and shephard walks toward home.THEN!!! the sun comes out, And out of the mountains flys a FALCON!!!  and lands on the shephared shoulder and whispers in ear and then flys away back to the mountains and the shephard say I MUST take my sheep home and see my wife, and as the shephard gets home the sun is going down he puts his sheep way and sees his wife outside waiting his wife says where have you been your late the shepard say the LORD has been calling me BUT!!! i told him i must take my sheep home and see my wife she said your dinner waiting so thay ate and went to bed and the LORD called agin on the shephard and as he looks out the door and see the light his wife walks in to the mountains.  

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sparrowsong

Hello Greg...

It reads like a Mystery...

Leaving it open for the Readers imaginations...

Great write!

Thank you for sharing...

Hugs...

sparrowsong

 

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Greg Etsell

thank you sparowsong the ending was hard I just couldn't come up with the ending the rest of the poem was good

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