Poem -
THE OLIVE TREE IN THE CATHEDRAL
Like 12 Pin it 2THEY SAID PLEASE COME TO LONDONĀ Ā Ā
TO SEE THE FLOWERS ON THE GROUNDĀ
ALL ROUND THE OLIVE TREE IN THE CATHEDRAL
THEY SAID COME LISTEN TO ARE SERVICE
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WITH THE DEAN AND LISTEN TO ARE CHOIR SING
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AND THE BELLS WILL RING AFTER SERVICEĀ
THE SUN WILL SHINE AND BIRDS WILL SING
BY THE OLIVE TREE IN THE CATHENDRAL
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Comments
I have an Olive tree. Great write
Thank you GregĀ
Aww the little Olive tree ā¤ļøšā¤ļø
Thank you JillĀ
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Interesting Greg!!......thanx for sharing this with us all!!....smiles.....T xoĀ : )
Awww thank you Tony coming from you this means a lotĀ
You took the simple olive tree and gave it a story. Beautiful Greg thank you :)Ā
Thank you so much GwendolineĀ
It took me a long time to write this but finally it came to me
Your writes are getting better and better Greg as you experiment with different styles...enjoyed my friend x
Thank you so much MarionĀ
sometimes it gets harder and harder to write I wanted to do something different and I did but it was still hard
Hard work pays off Greg...it is evident in your work š¤š¤
Thank you and you are right
Now I really want to visit.. lol
i love music, singing, bells and the whole darn thing..
i am coming.. keep an eye out.
thank you WilfordĀ
i hope you do go to London
i dont live there i live inĀ
America but i have been to
LondonĀ
I love this Greg! Your unique take on poetry I'd awesome to read.
thank you FishĀ
i am so happy you like itĀ
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Greg you took a beautiful olive tree and surrounded it with a beautiful cathedral and presented both entwined in your beautiful uplifting poem.
Full honours deservedly given and thank you for writing and sharing a poetic voice of much needed soothing calm.
thank you Shaun this cathedralĀ
is in London its called southwarkĀ
and love there service i have been there onesĀ
fell in love with the place came home
and add them to facebook and to tell
you Shaun i sent this poem to themĀ
and the wrote back and told theyĀ
loved it and going to but in theĀ
archives so i am realy honoredĀ
they like and what they will do with it
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Nice write Greg. I like the use of the word 'Are' very English indeed.
Take careĀ - SydĀ
Like I said, Greg, Cosmo has become my Sunday church where I heal all my hurts (Faithless). Sorry I won't be visiting this olive tree but I will think of it when in La Provence this summer, there be lots and lots of friends for this one overtherešš
thank you John i am so gladĀ
you like itĀ now whereĀ
is LA ProvenceĀ
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That is in the South of France, say east of Avignon, South of the Mont Ventoux and North of Marseille. In fact, look up the Luberon (mountain range) and you found it. My wife went to school there from fifteen till eighteen. Glad she decided to come to Amsterdam too to study English lit (like I did at the same time). Won a wife and a marvelous holiday destination š¤£
Ā this is in London in southwark cathedralĀ
i sent this poem to them and they loved itĀ
and will put it in there archives thank youĀ
for reading my poem JohnĀ i willĀ have to look up
where this place is in France
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Hey Greg. I love the simplicity in this write about a beautiful olive tree. I love it that you having fun with your poetry. Pxxx
Thank you PratibhaĀ
You have captured a moment in time with words. I love the calming vibe to this write. Simple but extremely effective. Love it!! šššš x
Thank you Tina
There is something very special about olive trees, something timeless that reminds me of holidays and history & lots of other things besides .. you have captured some of that special something here Greg .. well done mate :)Ā
thank you Neville i wroteĀ
this poem forĀ southwark cathedral
in london i sent to themĀ
and they loved itĀ