Poem - 20 August 2017, 10:45

The One

Through the window she did look;
past the trees with leaves that shook;
to the path to await her knight;
who turns her world from dark to light.

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Tony Taylor20 August 2017, 11:52

Hey ELAINE!!.... the succinctly powerful and compelling nature of this piece is delivered perfectly here......great word choices making the phrasing shine in the minds eye of the reader..... well conceived and BEAUTIFULLY delivered !!......ALL STARS!!...... well done...... and ....,,WELCOME to COSMO!!......LOVE and ROCKETS!!.......T xo ?☀✴✳

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Elaine23 August 2017, 17:16

Thank you for comment; your words are thrilling, so much so I felt my heart leap.

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