Poem -
THE PAIN
The pain I feel right now
I'll take it till tomorrow
though I'll not keep much longer
nor try to hide my sorrow
the soul must take its toil
I'll not risk to be broken-hearted
I'll just listen what my heart dictates
or look back how things get started
yes, I'll open my heart and dreams
but the pain still remains!!!
Leah Cabael Yodico
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so sorrowful yet still open to hope and dreams,
the pain hurt, yet it dosnt deter you from reaching your goals...whatever they may be
really enjoyed this
Lorna
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I'm glad you enjoyed this Lorna ##
just try to leave the pain behind ##
I still have hopes and dreams, it's never too ##
Dear poet sister LEAH!!..... one of the most difficult things we have to master in this lifetime...... is forgiveness...,,not just for others..... but for ourselves..... and when we learn to do that.... we open ourselves to future possibilities and the pain we leave behind..... becomes easier..... Love the positivity here......ALL STARS!!...... well done my friend!!......LOVE and ROCKETS!!.....T xo ?☀✴✳♥
My dear poet brother Tony, you summed it up all ## if we can forgive others why can't we forgive ourselves ## I reckon, I've been too hard on myself ## but I'm learning ##
Thank you for your support and encouraging comments ###
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Hi Leah, pain comes in so many forms doesn't it?, physical, emotional and spiritual- all of which breaks us little by little.You ,however, are coming through that by forgiveness which is the hardest thing- to forgive others and more importantly yourself. I loved this piece and it really resonates with my inner self- nice work !!
Lodigiana xxx
Hi Lodigiana, any kind of pain takes a lot of energy out of you## I've been through a lot of pain and honestly speaking, I think this one is the hardest thing ### Thanks for your feedback. I really appreciate that ###
Hi Flower Girl, when someone close to you betrays you, it hurts. ## When you don't know the reason at all, you try to ponder what went wrong, what have you done ## it takes time to forgive the person and yourself.. Thank you for your support ##
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yes, I'll open my heart and dreams
but the pain still remains!!!
It's nice to know that the pain doesn't stop you from dreaming....That you'd still open your heart in spite of the pain...Lovely write Leah.... Enjoyed
Hi, Leah.
I enjoyed your heartfelt piece. Your words paint a vivid picture of loss and pain, with hope for the future.
Lindi
Thank you ##glad you enjoyed it ###