The pain of dying L.O.V.E

PLEASE READ: My vision was fading and hearing was muted.
My stance became weak and scents of awareness was lost.
My veins begin to Thicken and heart pounded with Force.
My chest started to ache and eyes filled with hopeless tears.
My soul snatched and body Abandoned.

(Oh have I meet the pain of LOSING.)

The room began to darken and the sound was silenced.
The room became unbalanced and the floor greeted me.
The air was stel and temperature was unbearable.
The room had two souls and now only one.

(Oh have I been OVERWHELMED)

The soul was tall and thin as a model.
The soul has hair and Beautiful like the Atlantic queens.
The soul voice was soothing and relaxing to the ears

( oh have I lost one true VISON)

We connected with every commons
We knew each other’s darkest secrets
We felt the pain of ones hurt

(Oh have we lost EVERLASTING.)

We was told Losing in this journey was going to happen but we wasn’t Thinking of completely lost.

We was told we may be Overwhelmed with everyday issues but we wasn’t thinking of pain.

We was told our clear Vision was going to be blurred but wasn’t thinking of darkness.

We was told we will have Everlasting connection but yet it’s beginning to fade away. 

(Who said LOVE for each other was going to be easy).

haven’t done a short story and forever but comment your opinion on this one. I have more on the way and working on a book.