The Pane Of My Soul- The Pain Of My Heart
You were always the window pane, for peeping straight into my soul;
On the day we met, you entered it, and it changed from half to whole!
For you filled it with your love so pure, which made it then complete;
Then at last it found its perfect mate, which it lovingly did greet!
It was so easy to look inside of it, so clearly was it revered;
Transparent was our ardent love; that shone for all that neared!
For many years our portals gleamed, the guiding light of our domain;
But then one night the darkness came, and brought with it the pain!
The pain that now is in my heart, for you are no longer here;
It sobs now in such solitude, filled with angst and endless fear!
It broke in half, the night you left, and is now beyond repair;
For you were its’ coagulate, but now no longer there!
Heart and soul, pain and pane, so close, but yet so far;
The latter ones’ translucency, the formers’ fallen star!
A sympatric pair of homonyms, but antonyms and synonyms much more;
For one is “Love”, the other “Pain”, but both bring “The Tears Of Evermore”!
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Beautiful write LARRY!!.......I have lost two younger sisters.......I too understand the pain of loss...... such as you have so beautifully described here....... It is interesting to realize that Love extends beyond this life...... that it has a voice and a purpose in the eternal ballet of evolution...... that death (quite possibly) is just a doorway to a new beginning........LOVE this piece.......ALL STARS....... well done brother .........LOVE and ROCKETS!!.........T xo
Hi Poetic Brother Tony,
First of all, I'm so sorry to hear about your sisters. I too lost my sister, my only sibling and can commiserate with your pain. Hopefully, as you say, death is but a stepping stone to the hereafter. Thanks for the love brother.
Peace, Love and Rockets,
xox Larry
Hi  Larry A beautiful piece of poetryÂ
Which many will relate to who have lost loved onesÂ
some lines reminded me so much of my mam
Great write my friend  Love n hugs Debs xox
Hi Dear Debs,
Thank you so much for your sweet words. I am so happy that it reminded you of your "Beloved Mam".Â
Hugs, Peace and Love,
xox Larry
My darling Larry,
This broke my heart reading it because I know that you are suffering so much and that I can`t be there with you physically to help you through it all. You know how much I love you my darling don`t you and I always will be here for you, I`m just at the end of the telephone line waiting for your call. Just know that I hold you, my Linda, little Cody and our beautiful Nico close in my heart and my heart and soul will always be yours always and forever.
This piece had me in floods of tears because I so very much feel all your pain my darling and I so very much want to help you through all that pain because although sadly I never had the chance to meet our beautiful darling Nico, I want you to know that I fell in love with him too with the very first poem that I read of yours and I`m so thrilled that you put his picture with it, because I now have his picture to treasure myself. I have printed it off and framed it and it is on my writing desk in my study and I give him a kiss and a cuddle every morning and every night when I say night night God bless and sweet dreams to him and tell him how much we all love him and miss him every single day.
This is a beautifully well written and wonderfully thought out piece that allows me personally to be with you every step of the journey with you and my Linda and my soul is yours forever my darlings.
Well done for this piece I am so proud of my Larry, give each other a huge tight cuddle for me and a kiss too and don`t forget to give one to Cody too from his auntie G.
I love you all deeply
G xx
Hi Our Dearest G,
There are no words that could ever express the beauty of what you have just written us. It brought tears to our hearts and love to our souls, for in them we know that we have found a beloved soulmate. To think about what has transpired in the last year is beyond all comprehension. We have shared tears, laughter, pain and humor, and have been a panacea for each others hearts and souls. Some day, we will all come together while still on the earth, and clasp hands, hearts and souls. God Bless You.
All our love, Linda and Larry
Hi G,
I wanted to tell you how touched I was upon finding out that you have a picture of our dear Nico on your desk, and that you talk to him each morning and evening. I am so honored!
Love,
Linda