The Particle's Obedience
Spirit children ere we are;" trailing clouds of glory".
Written in our hearts of trust, surely reflect the story!
Sailing on the breath of life; overlapping leaven,
Child of light passing through, such; is the kingdom of heaven!
Stifling the dust; a wind of opposition,
Stiffening the trust; from fiery darts of friction!
Being hardhearted; embracing the sith of pride!
Justify our whims, squelching the violence inside.
Oppressed and forced to bow, then courage brings us back!
Open minded; softens the will, agency intact.
Imagine dreams that activate and power!
The particle's obedience; to fractal out; or tower!
Then listen to the sounds; a deity creation,
Follow the spiral galaxy; of frosted imagination!
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thank you for the support Greg my brother!
Hey JIM!!......I love that you ran with this idea in a Sonnet's formatting....VERY clever and adds to the overall tone.....I also love that you pointed out the "Spiral" in your final lines because it is SO key, SO integral, to understanding the mathematics and the sciences in our reality.....VERY well considered write my friend.......ALL STARS!!.......well done!.....LOVE & ROCKETS!!......T xo : )
hey Tony! thank you so much for reading! I love the sonnet format, it works for me! I know just enough math to get me in trouble,lol! I know a little about Heavenly Fathers ways and Tried to express an inkling of it here.
thank you Baker Street! I'm so glad that you feel that my poem conveys light, because that was an intent. I also tried to convey that nature has structure in fractal elegance,. thank you bunches!
Beautiful and interesting write as always Jim ...hugs x
glad you liked it Marion! thank you!
Admirable work!👍🏼
thank you for the support JP!
thank you for the support Neville!
Hi Jim,
I Think you raised your game
to another level!
Very good.
Love,
Terry.
xoxo :)
thank you Terry, but this is an old one, so maybe I'm going down hill.
Soulful write, soulfully written, love the undertones.
thank you so much Liliana!
A beautiful poem you always wrote to the highest level .😊🙏
thank you bunches Carol Anne!
thank you for the read and support Mr. Morrison!
Well written Jim…..
Nature has meaning and nature certainly has balance instilled here Jim.
A poem of light and the spiral represents the movement of life, with a fractural fibonacci sequence always ongoing, never ending, always recurring just like pi.
And one day perhaps The Great Plan will be revealed to all, but then it won't matter, for to be one is to be all.
A terrific write offered up here Jim and one to get a reader thinking.
Thank you my friend and all good things to you and family.