Poem -
The Perfect Hue
he is sat within the bosom
of our cherry blossom dreams
reflecting on the potent sway
of our lavender luminescence
those effervescent pearlescent kisses
that stick like pollen to wishes
we have yet to tickle
his mind trickles
drizzles inside
a silken wave
of two tangible souls
like a kaleidoscope they unfold
as soft as sunrise
kissing the night sky
into fields of blue
a melodic existential tonic
to arouse the perfect hue
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Comments
beautiful Gwen!.................Jim
Many thanks Jim, so happy you enjoyed this one :)
What a dreamy romantic beauty of a write Gwen....you are such a beautiful writer, its so good to have you back, i love this....hugs xx
Thanks my friend. Hopefully I won’t go numb. Although I swear my sleep deprivation is bleeding into my poetry of late..hugs back atcha xx
Don't you dare Dissappear...your words are beautiful xx
Thanks lovely…I will try not to. My sleep deprivation is making me a bit more scatty than normal xx
As well as making me feel like I want to be a bee .. I think I need take a cold shower ..
and apart from anything else .. 'The Perfect Hue' not only has hidden depths that makes one want to explore deeper and further .. but makes one want to linger and savour every single blue blushed word .. x
please note .. those words in italics may be blamed on poetic license .. the rest is gospel
Wow Nev my friend, what a reaction to my poem :) can’t thank you enough for this fab feedback
should I send round a bucket of ice maybe ? ;)
thanks lovely for this x
Wow, you know how to Romance (and a perfect fit for my own weekend of restful, all consuming love 🎉👏😇). Well done!!!
Awe John many thanks my friend. I hope you and your beloved are enjoying your Sunday x
One wishes to you every happy ness.
Love us best experienced over and over again.
Love is eternal and death is no reason for them not to feel the same and want the world for us.
PEACE AND LOVE FOR YOU AND ALL.
This is a waterfall of poetic rhyme scheme and utter love of life and love in its truest of forms.......I am at a loss!!.......friggin' beautiful!!......lots of love!!.....thank you ....you the most lovely of ladies!!.......smiles.......Tony : )
I sure enjoy reading your poems, they are read out loud and read again