The Person Within

My ear is kept open to the whispering thoughts within.
When I let their words soak in,
the person inside starts to grin.
"You're fat, you need to be more thin"
"I can see you're starting to get a double chin"
"You have too much acne on your skin"
The hardest war to fight is yourself, and I will win.
I wonder how long I've been fighting and when this all started to begin.
Was this software in our brains built-in?
Where people want death so bad they sprint?
They've told themselves over and over that it's the best solution, convinced.
Wanting the fast life they start to become addicted to the syringe.
You can't hear their silent cries and screams but they're saying "I need a pinch"
"Help me before I spin the wheel and end up in a ditch"
They realized they took the wrong road and want to turn back, called you up and asked for a hitch.
Everyone is at war with this anonymous person inside, some just can't take it anymore and leave off on a bridge.
We can't let that side of us win.
Before we pass away, we should be happy being in our own skin.
And defeating the negative person within

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Hey BEASTY!!..... I've been keepin' up with your fagizzle......and it seems to Me the anorexic plea to......"I Gotta BE Me!!" ...is serious stuff girl....... but then I read your rhyme scheme and poetic delivery...... and it hasĀ an almost Dr.Seuss quality to its pentameter....... you'reĀ a gifted writer..... and I'm praying that most of the subject matter.... you write on..... is FICTIONAL...... otherwise.... I'd say you'reĀ in anĀ unbelievably stressful environment...... hope all is well my friend.......ALL STARS!!...... compelling stuff sweet poetess!!........ LOVE and ROCKETS!!........T xo.Ā ?ā³ā“ā
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I try to write from someone else's perspective and talk about their struggles. Don't wotry, Ā I don't have an eating disorder. And thank you again?