The Porcelain Angel Part 2
Welcome to this unruly chain of thoughts known as The Asylum
Oh, you haven't tasted the bitterness of the evil presence that lies within? You should try it some time
We all have our demons, remember mine? I believe he's been introduced before
The kind of monster who deteriorates the soul of living
A maniac, disguised as prince charming,
With him, you're not permitted to stop giving
He's the kind who makes you human, no more
And now he's taken too much, she's discovered how strong she can be
Yet she takes her time, waits her turn to score
"Darling, you can't get rid off me" he tells her in the voice of a gentlemen
She grins within
This monster has acquired the confidence that will kill him
Obeying his every command until she feels no more remorse, no sorrow
Too long she has been training herself to defeat his cunning authority
Will she abolish him? Or will he still manipulate her tomorrow ?
She premeditates her way out
You think you have it all figured out
Anxiously tapping her fingers, tap, tap, tap
Stay tuned
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Some have mentioned I could have continued on from the first poem. Well here it is. And there will be more to come
Hey Amber!!.......this is a real work to be proud of.........the way you used different tools to convey your story line poetically...........the spoken words in quotation.........the feel of Poe in the tap, tap, tapping..........the ambiance peppered with a sense of darkness to come........from a man out of control.........you really have a knack for story-telling........or "The Narrative" in poetry.........you have created a softness in your voicing that is inviting and intimidating........as though blood was about to spilled.....and then the coup 'de gras.......your interior thought process setting up your reader..........."She premeditates her way out.."..........you're good............well done..........ALL STARS.............peace..........T xo
Tony, hey there I really appreciate your kind words. I love public speaking so I see my poetry more as a speech or a story. Glad you liked it.
Also, if it went us noticed, this monster isn't really a person
An alter ego I tried to create here.
Wow I love this personaly you are correct we all have demons some stronger and stranger and more deformed than others il admit mine is fat and likes to sit on my enimes lol hold them down make it to were they can't move of cource that's a metaphors fir holding a grudge I loved your piec Amber it's extremely amazing and trully an great pic you choose to go along with the poem great job and thank you for sharing :D
I plan to make two or more sequels to this. Thank you so much for taking the time to read and comment on my work! Sending good vibes