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The roaring seaside 💙

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Jill Tait
The roaring seaside 💙

As all the lovely children ran away like little rabbits and played

Amidst those colourful clouds that teased and tantalised the sizzling sun, with such a sheer clandestine canopy of a subtle silhouetted, shade

And the echoing of laughter was so much louder than yon roaring seaside that tossed and sprayed

As I wonderfully watched whilst my meandering motion of the ocean, was proudly, pleasantly portrayed…

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Acceptance Action Affection Awareness Awesome
Poetry Genre: 
Epic Narrative Romance Speculative Verse
Topic: 
Happiness
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Marion

Beautiful and uplifting write Jill xxx

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Jim "The Lad" ....

I concur with Marion!...................................................................lad

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Jill Tait

Ooooh “Concur”” teehee I must use thisun, it rhymes so well with her, inter etc etc … Thanks my lovely Jim the lad ❤️🥰💕

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