Poem -
The rose
To have found love and to know its existence is to know life without emptyness
Love is like the beauty of a single red rose yet without its fragrance the beauty's unknown
The color so rich the petals so soft but without its scent the beauty is lost
For this I say to know love in its fullest content is to know a rose only holds beauty within its scent
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Wonderful style of writing you have which so incisively puts across each point you want to make. Lovely clarity and purpose you have to your poetry.
Wishing you all the best ! Take care. :)
Thank you for taking the time to write me. Such lovly words and kindness. Thank you
:) Thank you for sharing your poetry !
Hi Melissa A beautiful write of the comparison
of love to a rose
Very much enjoyed Welcome to Cosmo
look forward to reading more of your work
Best Wishes Debs
Thank you for taking the time to write and for your kind words
Hey Melissa.....the title caught me....I'm Rose and so couldn't resist it when I saw it....I'm glad I read.....it's beautiful.... Enjoyed it
Cheers....Rose
Thank you so much for taking the time to write. I'm also glad you enjoyed it
great poem Melissa
beautiful poem, one typo though. Petals is misspelled
Thank you so much
Hey Melissa..... lovely write......I do think that this could have been MUCH more powerful if you had formatted it differently (just my opinion, please don't take offense)....... but regardless.......a great sense of rhythm and timing shown here.......ALL STARS...... well done....... and ......WELCOME to COSMO!!!.......T xo ?
Enjoyed this very much Meliss, the beauty of the rose is not enough it is self, the fragrance from deep inside is the where the true beauty is found. The bee knows his flowers, especially the purple rose, it's his favourite.