Poem -
The scarecrow of the sea
Like 4 Pin it 2The dark clouds overcome the sea,
As the scarecrow stands on the beach
And wind blows in his face as he stands
in place,As the sand blows on his feet,
And the birds fly from the heart of life to the death lock of hell,
The clouds shell pass over the sea,
And then the sea shell overcome scarecrow washing him out to sea
The Scarecrow of the sea,
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WOW!! GREG!!.....you did a great job of interpreting that video......allowing it to manifest as poetry through your ever-growing talent for wielding words!!.......ALL STARS!!....well done dear poet brother!!......LOVE & ROCKETS!!........T xo
Thank you Tony it’s actually an old poem
that I brought forward and formatted differently the video is still the same thank you for reading Tony
Awwww Greg this is one of my absolute dreamy favourites of yours 🌹❤️🌹 I love, love, love your eerie video… Oooh what an ambience of the oceanic blues 💙💙💙
Thank you so much Jill
it’s kind of an old poem
I just formatted it a different way
Didn’t come out the way I like it but it’ll do
Lisa in here that sings is my favorite Her eerie videos I love to watch sometimes and put together poems I have done 2 by her
Her voice is beautiful 🌹❤️🌹
Yes
Yes I use it too & rhymezone lots its great for my rhyming xx
I use rhymeszone all the time
and then I asked Siri how to spell
Awww well u got it sussed luv👍⭐️🌹
Well its all about the layout n spelling I find… like ai said before.. when reading, put a coma or .. when u breathe …. 🌹❤️🌹 but u r doing great my lovely lad & who am I to judge anyways 💕💞💕
I thought I did all right on spelling
Do u use spell check ? Xx yes u did xx
Yes I do all the time
And then the sea shell overcome scarecrow washing him out to sea
The Scarecrow of the sea,
shell is shall ? Or shell luv x
i read mine over couple times & still I miss errors haha
but I read it for the flow and grammar more than anything xxx Brilliant luv 🌹❤️🌹
You know you’re right I’m gonna make a change
Nooo don’t make changes for me 🌹❤️🌹
You told me I spelled shall when it’s shell So I changed it from shall to shell
🌹❤️🌹we away lil walk round riverside now 🌹💕🌹
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OK thank you all taken care of
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Greg a poignant poetic tale and so well told and beautifully presented.
A haunting quality throughout and then the endless sea claims him.
Superb poem and the Lisa Gerrard video equally so.
And she also sang on the Gladiator soundtrack.
Thanks for sharing Greg, full deserved honours and respectfully given.
Thank you Shaun
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Thank you Charlotte I hope you watch the video