Poem -
~ THE SERVANT ~ (Energy Evolving)
Come forth, oh proof, through meditation's truth
That gathers beyond Universal Mind
God do etch upon my hearts desire
The spirit of beauty's eternity sublime
Speak to me of the blood of time's passing
Spiraled in Love's pure DNA
Where once those veins silently surpassing
The light entwined in beauty's array
Roll on, roll on, oh energy of life
Speak of how my soul can give
To the shelter of the creator's light
His Love, through me, do sweetly sieve
Tell me how I might become your light
Your servant, your healing passion
Show me the man I dare to strive
To become the loving, light of compassion...
Tony Taylor
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Comments
WOW!!!!!!!
if EVER there was a piece that screamed:
"TRANSCENDENCE to another realm of Thought"
this work would be that piece.
It's perfect Tony, sincerely.
to say more would take away from it's
essence, because I'm just a man.
but you've got some Individuation
vibes goin on with this one for sure.
thanks for posting this.
you just saved my day from
monotony.
I don't know what to say J!!.....that's one helluva 'pat on the back'....... Thank you kind Sir!!...... most sincerely!!..... T xo 🐧❤😊
great poem Tony I love it brother
but some how I feel it should be
longer but I don't know why
I feel it dose it great poem
Longer??... Hmmm!!......I kinda know what you're talking about.... that feeling that just gnaws at you.... as though there is something missing..... I'll take it under advisement Greg!!...... Good lookin' out!!......I appreciate your taking the time man!!...... Peace n Stuff!!........T xo 🐧❤
Yes something missing but it’s stilll great poem
Very powerfully reflective poem, T! The code in our own DNA points to intelligent design and that we are a part of something bigger...ever evolving that our Creator has put into play a long time ago. I love the way the poem transcends into a humble plea to draw closer to understanding the light and energy that draws you....to be the man and compassionate soul that God calls you to be...a very worthy pursuit. I love your spiritual writes. xo Love n Hugs, C
Thank you C!!....I do SO love writing spiritual poetry..... that is ~ the evolution of our spiritual and metaphysical understanding of the creator...... and of course, the study of our past historical, architectural, religious, mythological, warring, paranormal, scientific, and 'all-encompassing accomplishments!! (smiles)..... whew 😒!!.....I better get to work!!.....thanx for this sweetheart!!.... kisses...... from your husband and best friend 🐧❤
Thanx for the vote RICHARD!!....I know I owe you a couple of reply's on earlier writes too!!..... I'll get right to it my friend!!.....T xo 🐧❤
Thank you for the vote AL!!..... talk soon !!......T xo 🐧❤
Thanx for the vote JOHN PROPHET!!....I was really curious to know what you thought about this write!!..... anyway, maybe next time!!..... smiles....T xo 😉