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The Strong One

The Strong One

The strong one

Always carries the weight no one else will

Never mentioning, moving,while others stand still

The strong one

Builds other people up, not tearing them down

Wears a smile ear to ear, when they'de rather wear a frown

The strong one

Takes control, leads they way

Tells the truths no one has the nerve to say

The strong one

At times, needs to cry, feels broken

Spares everyone the trouble, so their fears, their tears, go unspoken

The strong one

The one everyone thought would always be there

Didn't show up to work this week, suddenly everyone cares

The strong one

Damaged

Couldn't be strong anymore

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AMBER LEGOWSKI

Thanks sweety. Glad you liked it. I love how you are always so kind, even through the things you haven't agreed with. Hugs

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Bradford

Hey amber this writes has meaning for me because I was the strong one in my marriage and carrying all the stress and dragging me down. I tried my best to be the strong one but in the end I was having a hard time coping with day to day life . Much respect for this one . Great work. Hugs to you rock 

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Gianfranco DiMare

This resonates nicely - I was intrigued to the very end.
Potential rock song, maybe a ballad?

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Gianfranco DiMare

Cool!

I cut my teeth with Van Halen, Dokken, Queensrÿche, Crimson Glory, Icon, Fifth Angel, Vicious Rumours, Yngwie, TNT, and a few other Euro/Scandinavian bands.

Rock on!

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AMBER LEGOWSKI

I like stuff more like, slipknot, slayer, lamb of god, static x, otep, megadeth and so on

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Gianfranco DiMare

megadeth and slayer were more like my brother's favs.
I liked a couple of tracks from megadeth's countdown to extinction album and bunch of old slayers classics like south of heaven and war ensemble etc.

slipknot, static x and the others are a bit past my early childhood lol! but I might check them out.
 

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