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THE SUN AND THE MOON

The Sun and the Moon loved each other to the point they were breaking,
they knew it was wrong yet they stayed together,
they were hurting yet they were fighting against the odds,
it was a true love story but the ending was shaking.

The Sun and the Moon loved each other despite the distance,
they knew it wouldn’t work yet they tried,
they knew it was meant to fall apart yet the hoped,
it was a true love story on the verge of existence.
 

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Being Me

They do say that love conquers all. I am not so sure. Great poem x

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Tony Taylor

Hi KRISTINA!!......so good to see you on the pages.....This is a VERY strong poetic metaphor!!....and is VERY relatable in so many different ways!!....I guess that's what Metaphors are intended for......ALL STARS!!.....A lovely and engaging write!!......LOVE & ROCKETS!!......your friend and admirer!!.....T xo  : )

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Kristina

Hey Tony! thank you so much!

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