Poem -
THE TALE OF THE ACORN
The sky is blueÂ
the sun is bightÂ
on a cold winter
 Day and the windÂ
Was Blowing all aroundÂ
In the oak tree was
Acorn who sat in
Tree by a church
by the sea on theÂ
Ground was chipmunk
And squirrel running
aroundÂ
I am acorn in tree
some time they call
me an oaknut well
on this day was sunday
church was in and
SUDDENLY !!!! I fell to groundÂ
where the squirrelÂ
and chipmunkÂ
running aroundÂ
THEN!!!! the squirrelÂ
found me and he stoodÂ
up and held me in his hands
SUDDENLY!!! the chipmunkÂ
Ran by stole me away andÂ
down his hole i wentÂ
And puts me in cornerÂ
With all the other acornsÂ
AND THAT TALE OF THE ACORN
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Awwww he was caching his nutsđ¤ŁđĽ°â¤ď¸đâ¤ď¸Pinned x
Lol he he
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Interesting tale my friend!!.........made me smile!!.......thanx for that!!........ALL STARS!!.......LOVE & ROCKETS!!..........T xo : )
Thank you Tony kind of didnât come out the way I wouldâve like that I couldâve said more at the end
Your broken line structure sometimes have highlights that make me read over and over... this is my favorite from this poem
So much like a song its magnificent. Peace and smiles. The Fish of the SeaÂ
Thank you fish didnât turn out the way I really wanna write a somewhat think that I couldâve said more towards the end finished kind of fast with nothing after he went down the hole  and was in the corner but you pointed out the things that I like in the poem I just have to change some things to make it sound better Thanks for reading
"... puts me in cornerÂ
With all the other acorns"
So will the acorn be happy with others?
Thank you Yiyan
I think the acorn will be happy
There is a very special charm to this poem Greg. The reader cannot help but smile x
thank you Tina
You have a great sense of humour Greg, love thisÂ
Happy New YearÂ
thank you Leah
Loved reading this Greg for it it's fun write and has an innocent charm of its own, with more than a tale (no pun intended) or two to tell.
And one to email to my daughter who'll enjoy reading your poem too.
Thanks Greg and sometimes a charismatic poem is often the most challenging to write let alone think up.
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Thank you shaun You sent this poem to your daughter thank you so much that means a lot to me
Greg she will love reading it and I'm catching up again tomorrow and if I see any more that I believe she'll enjoy I'll tag them and send them too.
And you have written so many with so many differing themes and content.
A great volume of work and a real joy to read as well.
And my hat is off to you Greg and I thank you and also a future thank you bestowed from my daughter.đ
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Oh thank you Shaun you have made my eveningÂ