Poem -

The Truth of Life

The world is but an open stage,
And each of us, the players page
We put our dress and makeup on,
And shun the truth of what we don

Afraid of what the masses think,
We scurry round to stay in sync
And if I'm not ahead of you,
I'll make a life that isn't true 

The mirror is a liar, too 
It shows our features so untrue
And so we change the way we look, 
Until the morn's our open book 

I wish the world was just more fake!
For I would not appear a flake
I'd simply post to all my friends,
To tell them where my weirdness ends

I had a dream, a dream of two,
The moment I set eyes on you,
But soon I found our lives a lie, 
As he was more in vogue than I.
 

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Jim "The Lad" ....

great write! welcome to Cosmo!.................................................................Jim

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When Death Does...

Why, thank you Jim. 
Sometimes I grow weary of this world. 
Appreciate it. 
WDD.

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Marion

Beautifully flowing and utterly sad. Great write WD x 

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The fish of the sea

Wow! What a write on culture in our society... I feel as if ever since Covid, the world has really been turned on its head. I bloody enjoyed this stanza,

Afraid of what the masses think,
We scurry round to stay in sync
And if I'm not ahead of you,
I'll make a life that isn't true 

I think the word scurry really shapes the image. Like humans are just insects... I feel with the ever-increasing interest in technology and social media this is really becoming the case... Brilliantly clever poetry here. What a debut! Welcome to the Cosmos!

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Being Me

Wow!  This is just a brilliant poem. Pinned to read again....and again. Welcome to Cosmo WDD. I am looking forward to reading more of your fantastic ink x

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Shaun Cronick

Great debut write and welcome to Cosmo WDD.
And your poem reads and flows effortlessly and love your final payoff conclusion.
Superb all round.

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Neville

I don't know why I never found these words before, what with us both being relatively new here .. but now I have, I am so bloomin glad I did .. I seriously enjoyed the visit and hope it is just the first of many ... All Good Things, Neville :) 

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Fiona Cummings

 I hope to read more from you. And, if this is true, I'm sorry for you. Please write as you have a gift. 

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