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The Untimely Death of a Wonderful Soul

The Untimely Death of a Wonderful Soul

If one likes to keep hopelessness
and defeat in a wallet in their pocket

and whom seek comfort from the Raven
rather than an Angel
 
I cannot help but wonder
does it simply demonstrate
 
that anything that wants to die
 
is surely already dead?

 

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Bernie Martin

Two of your main influences here Shirley. Raven and Angel. Love the internal rhyme on the second line and the idea within. 
Maybe the answer to your question which may have been rhetorical is - yes but inside rather than bodily. 🌹

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Marion

Yes I think it means that exactly Shirley and what a wonderful way to write it. All stars my friend. There is always hope though too, the angels keep trying ...hugs x

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Shirley Harrison

Absolutely and not only do we come out fighting we are a very kind breed, we can empathise and show compassion and I'm truly humbled you have come by today dearest Marion, thank you 💕🌹

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