Poem -
The Valley of Eve
Β
On my way
To the valley of Eve
I read your face like braille. Β
Β Lips, index finger. Β Β Β
Β silken skin.
Lingering by
Gently slopping hills
. Β pigmented area circling Β Β Β Β Β
. Kissing behind knees
Β inhale the fragrance of your
Β Β strawberry.
Hair, is a luminous mystery Β Β Β
Kiss you again, tenderly
but not for long
in these highlands,
I won't stay
I feel a hard rain coming
And deep in the valley,
is where my soul
finds sanctuaryΒ
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Comments
why is it you always manage to bring the heat to your page?? damn this is grand!
Β I wrote erotica from the heart, Lisa, or thereabouts, lol, thanks for commenting, glad you liked, cheers
Magnificent you can feel the physical emotions and energy with your choice of words I love it. ??
Chandra, I truly appreciate your comment on this poem, it is a favorite of mine and I'm so pleased that you enjoyed it, thanks you from the bottom of my heart, have great evening, poetess
" THERE'LL BE " SINGING " IN THE VALLEYS " over this one !!!Β :) :)
" WHALES " may be on the sonar. Or on the radar. :) They, will be pleased.
" IN THE HEAT OF THE NIGHT ", beyond the normal, is more.
Silence can be broken, by attention to the " sanctuary " and " sanctity "...... where souls reside, within dance, " laid-open " by the yearning for " escapist illusionist paraphrasing ", to release excess torment, and non-conformist " bewilderment " !!! :) :)
YOU, HAVE TO GIVE CREDIT, WHERE CREDIT IS DUE. For this audacious commentary on " contemporay " pronouncements, relating to silacious excursionist policy and vivacious flowing metamorphic states.
In the " TWILIGHT " zone is found the " directory of the heart " !!!
The dark grey cloud disperses, to show a " silver-lining ", illuminated, defying opportunist " pipe-dreams ", given that the original tendency can be towards the minimalist. From the " outset." :) :) IT, JUST SHOWS WHAT MAY HAPPEN !!Β
But, also praise destiny " delivering the goods " to make suppressed hope shake, with " the dawning " of a most worthy " diversifying " reappraisal. :) :) !!
HOW YOU DO SUCH A THING, IS BEYOND COMPARE. You, can be very proud, honestly !!! :) Not many can " touch " this !!!! :) :) BRAVO.
Take care.