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The Water Carrier

The Water Carrier

Hold onto a smile..its look ย  becomes you.
Hang onto a sweet memory...it will warm you on the coldest of days.
Treasure a gentle word,the sound of it will playย  in your head always.
Reach out for the hand of friendship..it will help steer you home.
Let go of that bottle..you know which bottle...
The one that weights so very little
and ย yet....
When you hold it for a short time..its just fine, ย 
no problem..
But hold it longer,
a few hours maybe?
A whole day maybe?
How does it feelย  now?
You arms ache, so so much..and yet,
the bottle is unchanged,
still the same bottle,ย 
still the same weight
but..your pain has increased...
When you hold ontoย  hurtย  and anger
Itโ€™s like that bottle,
It doesnt change.... butย  slowly you do.
The pain persists until it overcomesย  you.
Letย  it go my friend,ย 
just let it go...
It may not disappear ย 
but you donโ€™t have to keep ย carrying it..

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lodigiana

Thanks hun...I am on holiday at the moment and chilling after quite a stressful time and I remembered the analogy I had heard ages ago about how small things are only made ย bigger by hanging onto them longer than you have to..and I took my own advice and let it go..so wanted to pass that on..As always you are too kind xxx.ย 

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A Lonely Journey

Lodi!ย 
I miss you! I don't think I authorized a holiday, but I'll forgive you this time.ย 
What an incredible write, my friend. Oh my gosh, I thought it was going to be a light-hearted, pleasant write, but it just became a brilliant, hard hitting expose on the struggles of the bottle. Fantastic! Love that line 'It doesn't change...but slowly you do." That is awesome.ย 
Great job, my beautiful friend!ย 

Matthew.ย 

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lodigiana

Hello my lovely!, yes sometimes a change of scenery is the order of the day..so as long as there is wifi..however intermittent..I am happy.Feeling a little philosophical ย it set me thinking about how transient most things can be ..as long as we allow them to be..and choosing to let go of those things that give us pain.ie anger,revenge, hurt..is a choice we all have rather than emotionally to hold onto something until it becomes a mental burden,you chose to just let it go.. Missing you too my Honorary ย xxxxx

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