THE WEEKLY CONTEST
THE ASSASSINATION, The Reporter, We are waiting here today in this hall because the candidate will be comeing in to make a speech about are nation there must be 30,000 people here, He will be here any time soon, There are lots of security here so we think we are safe, Here comes come the candidate now has he steps up to the mic,Lets listen in, Candidate, My country man are nation will come back we will do well, 2 SHOTS can be heard,Reporter GUN SHOTS HAVE BEEN FIRED THE CANDIDATE HAS BE SHOT HE IS DOWN ON THE GROUND, all hell has breaking out people running ever where screaming and crying and running to hide,The candidate has been takin to the hospital, Reporter at hospital, We are here at the hospital waiting word on the candidate to see if he will live or not,Word just in the gunman has been found and killed no word on who he is,Word from the hospital is that the CANDIDATE HAS DIED!!!!, SHOCK HAS COME OVER THE NATION AND THE WORLD WHAT WILL THE NATION BE LIKE TOMORROW AND HOW WILL THE WORLD BE LIKE WITH OUT THE CANDIDATE IT WILL BE A MORE SCARY WORLD THEN NOW!!!!,
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Wow GREG!!.....this reads with vivid imagery....can easily visualize this as a breaking news story.....Like an "ON SCENE" ~ minute by minute update!!.....great entry for the contest dear brother poet!!....well conceived!!.....ALL STARS!!.....cool stuff my friend!!.....,LOVE & ROCKETS!!.....T xo ?☀✴✳♥
Ps. you might want to change the title word....you accidentally misspelled the word CONTEST!!...just thought you might want to know!.....smiles...T ?
Thank you Tony I want to write this as a regular story but I didn't think it would be something that would be good for here so the weekly contest came up I thout wow now I can write it I am glad you like it and changed what you told me to change thank you for reading means lot xxoo
Tony is spot on here, Greg; this reads like the on-the-spot reportage of a unfolding incident. It grabs your attention from the very first line and each new development leaves the reader anxiously wanting more...which may be why Cherie seems anxious for a sequel.
Well done.
J ;)
Thank you Jason your right it should have sequel to it but intill I can come up with part 2 it have to wait but like I told Cherie if you want to come up with the sequel that will be great so for now intill I think of the sequel it will have wait thank you for reading