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The wise old Eskimo

The wise old Eskimo

Once upon a time, many, many moons ago

There lived a wise, old eccentric Eskimo

Of course he crafted his igloo from hard packed snow

And he foraged for food from the icy earth below

Well as I have mentioned already, this old man was worldy wise

He listened to truth but ignored any lies

So his honourable trustworthiness was no surprise

When his clan made him their headchief until his inevitable demise

Now this old man was a very fine fellow of a senior sage

Who wrote down his life in verse on many a page

When he taught himself to write at an early age

And he sold his sensational stories to earn a living wage

He lived all alone in solitude

Though this was his choice, his independence was good

Mind you he would enjoy a laugh or two, when he was in the right mood

And invite his companions along from his clan, to share all of his food

My fictional face with yellowish-brown skin

Harpooning his fish like an old Kingpin

Stabbing with precision right through it’s dorsal fin

And enjoying his pride and joy with a great big grin…

 

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Gwendoline

Great narrative Jill
Loved the wording and rhythm in those last five lines especially 
Gwen x ♥

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Jill Tait

AwwThankx my lovely lass 💕❤️💕

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Marion

Really engaging little tale in perfect poetic form Mrs Tait...pinned xxx

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Being Me

A lovely poetic tale. I love the conversational tone you use in the narration x

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Jill Tait

AwwwThanks luv ❤️💕❤️

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Shaun Cronick

Neatly and precisely written Jill and wonderfully so in all in what you have to say throughout.
You often write something off the beaten poetry track and thank heavens for that.
A magical poem lovingly bestowed and loves your beat and flow and where you took me with your conclusion.
Thanks Jill and poetry kudos to you also and full honours too. x. 

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Jill Tait

Haha I do often wander off on tangents teehee 💕❤️💕

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