THE WISH
AS the lady looks in the mirror at herself she sees a younger woman and wishs she was young agin like in the mirror,So she can run round with the handsome young man next door, As she sits on the front porch she looks at photos albums at her younger self crying and laughing at each photos says I wish I was younger agin,As she falls sleep,She is SUDDENLY!!! SHAKED!!! as she wakes up she sees a man in a white suit hat she say what and who are you  looking startled,He says I am here to grant you the wish you want to be young and get the handsome young man,All you have to do is sign this contract and I will give you your wish so not reading it she signs it,He then touchs her on the arm she young agin as she looks in the  mirror she jumps for joy and thanks the man in the white suit.She runs out the door looking the handsome young man and talk and talks with him thay run off to have fun,But she see the man in the white suit  she ask what are you doing here he says its in the contract that you signed that you didn't read it says right here that I can have your SOUL!!!when you die She say who are you he say well dear I am the DEVIL!!!! ,She look at herself in the mirror and the young man and run away,But every where she went the DEVIL!!! was there,SUDDENLY!!! SHAKED agin she hears voice say grandma wake up are you all right she looks up to see her granddaughter she looks in the mirror and she her old self she looks at her granddaughter with tears in her eyes she say I must have been sleep I was dreaming I was young and beautiful agin and running around with the young man next doo,r Her granddaughter said some times dreams can be wonderful and some times can be NIGHTMARE!!! yes with the DEVIL!!! JUST then a man in a white suit walks by and drops a paper the granddaughter picks it and read it and tears it up and the DEVIL!! disappears the lady looks in the mirror and she sometime you have to be careful what you wish for, THE WISHÂ
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Some wishes can kill us....We all wish to go back in time sometimes...But we all know it's impossible...nice story Greg
thank you Rose yes we can only go back when remember are past and look at old photos
Hi Greg, Â I also wish I could stop the clock but I can't!! I just want to stay healthy ## be careful not to make a deal with the devil ? ?Â
I enjoyed reading this!!Â
Thank you Leah yes as long as are heath is good we are fine
Dear Greg,
What a devil of a poem. Â Was it a dream, or was it reality? Â Did she wake up in time to save her soul, or was it too late? Â Can her beloved Granddaughter bring her back, or has her time passed? Â
Sometimes, one must be careful what they wish for, because, "The Wish Master" might not have their best interests at heart.
Peace and Love,
Larry xxx
Thank you Larry no it wasn't dream I thought about this story for mouths looked  at many photos intill I found this one this story is similer to the opera Faust where the doc in the opera is old and want to be young agin so he can run around with a beautiful young girl so the doc summons the devil to help him get what he wants so the devil says ok I will give what want but you have to give me your soul so the doc say ok so he young agin and run around with the young girl but the devil being the devil drives the girl mad intil she goes insan so he can get the doc soul so the doc ends up back in his room and old man and the devil come to him and say I want your soul and the doc say no you didn't give me want I wanted so it ends. my story I worte has her falling asleep and having dream that the devil came to her when she wakein up by her granddaughter then realize that its all dream she was having cool story don't think thank you so much for reading and yes you have to be careful what you wish for som times I could happen xxoo thank agin for reading
My Dear Greg,
I didn't realize you were telling the story of Faust. Â But, I loved your spin off more. Â Your poems just keep on getting better and better.
Peace and Love,
Larry xxx
thank you Larry your inspiration in yours and others who are in cosmo help me try to be a better writer thank you so much for inspiration
Hello Greg...
Your comment on mine brought me to this...
Beware of strangers who grant wishes?
Or beware of wishes we make?
Great write!Â
Thank you for sharing...
Hugs...
sparrowsongÂ
thank you Sparrwsong I thought of this story mouths ago looked fro many photos then found this one so it all came togather thank you fro reading xxooÂ
Wow Greg yes we all should take a leaf outta her book & be more careful, Brilliant !!!! Loved it loads xx
Thank you JillÂ
Yes this poem is brilliant and I see I have told you so back in 2017 wow I must have been on Cosmo years lol ❤️?❤️
I’ve been here since 2016 for years now all the thinks  to Larry ran and told me to get in here Thank you very much for reading
Yes I now see you did read it it says something my mind isn’t what it used be