Poem -
The World is Lost
The world is lost; wants me to follow,
It gasps for air and echoes it's hollow.
It pursued the truth thinking He fled,
Following the empty;seeking the dead.
It cannot hear; with a gaping voice,
The process of plunder; the galloping horse!
I found the way; the truth; the light!
And His people of fair delight!
What did He see in the hearts of men?
To offer the chance to begin again?
He suffered the narrow; they track the past,
Plotting the course of freedom at last!
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Comments
Just anΒ awesome write, great rhyming.Β
Thank you so much Liliana!
Write more please.Β
Your wish; is my command!
Good write, and nice image with your creation as well. Like it.
Yes, the world is strayed for quite a long time, and hope God's light will guide it to find Home.
Thank You Yiyan!...Jim
The Goddess/God - I think the Powers Above are not of either one of our sex - certainly plans for us to be free, only we need to do the work ourselves. Beautiful write and an inspiration to keep going... Keep the Flame alive
Thank You very much John!.............Jim
an awesome prose Jim. I enjoyed the read
Thank You very much POETESSDARKLY!
Lovely write of faith Jim π€
Thank you very much Marion, this is the one that started me up the path of poetry when a professor complimented me, and said I should write more.I thought it was just a simple little poem to help my family reach the truth I had found. So thank you all for seeing more than I could!............Jim
Jim, this is a truly gorgeous poem. There are some fabulous lines in this.Β
And this line is my favourite!
Great lines, fabulous rhyming with meter that is bang on perfect. Truly wonderful x
I wish that it had had the intended effect! Your words are a wonderful consolation, and encourage me to stay the course! Thank you so much! .......Jim
Wow, This was extremely deep. thought out and well written. Beautiful piece of work!
Thank you Stephanie!
It's so pleasant and light, like sitting on a cloud. A worthy contest winner in my opinion XD... Just a fab fab right Jim, sorry I nearly missed it. Kind regards. Your friend, Max
I guess I love sitting on clouds, and that helps me be very happy it had that effect !, Thank you Max I almost missed your comment!