THEIR SHALLOW LIVES

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SHALLOW LIVES
AND THE WIND WILL CARRY THE SMELL OF.
THEIR SHALLOW LIVES  
AND THE WICKED SHAll PERISH

i have changed 2 on here xx

Wow Greg such powerful imagery and message laced throughout your wording here. Shallow lives, lacking depth and meaning. We risk losing ourselves when we live in such a way. This is a wonderful poem my friend. Creepy and such depth about those shallow lives. Great writing 👏 👏 👏 xx

Wow Greg!! What a fantastic write!! So deep...looking into the psych of certain aspects of society and people...really meaningful write! X

Great message Greg as you managed to really stress the importance of having purpose while delivering it with a very entertaining and " mysterious " vibe. ~Rob 

I am onboard with the many comments you have received on this piece Greg.
Every day of our lives, we must find ways
to show love and kindness to our fellow humans..
Outside of that, we are living shallow lives. Wasted breath.
Work of art in my book.. Great topic.
 

WOW GREG!!....this is VERY insightful....especially if you look at it as though it were the Gods "Peeking out from the blinds.."...what would they see in the masses.....probably VERY much like what you have expressed here....a disappointment in many.....but also.....a pure happiness for the many who have been fortunate enough to find a real purpose.....but for me...it's the intensity that you have brought to the whole of this poem that is so impressive!!.....PINNED!!....your work continues to improve.....Well done dear poet brother!!.....LOVE & ROCKETS!!.....T xo  : )

This writing is strong and powerful. I appreciate the sentiment and
share it.  It is hard to be a part of life watching people wasting the gift, abusing others and themselves.. and some of them consider they are the shit!
I have been homeless and destitute and lost.  I found my biggest help from the forgotten and unloved. good write
sharaine

Superb moral message poetically portrayed here Greg and with a driving force with great aplomb.
Your relentless and reinforcing words never lets go and good to see such focused intensity reaching out.
Life they say is what you make it.
And there lies a simple moral even spiritual choice.
Which is, what's in it for me, what can I take from it.
Or how can I help others and what can I give back to make this world a better place for all.
The former lets hope there's hope for change and the latter I salute and respect.
I salute and respect you Greg for sharing your message.
Full honours deservedly bestowed and I wish you well ,stay safe and thank you.

Sock it to em Greg .. these words certainly pack a punch .. I particularly like the repetition that reinforces & in effect, serves to hammer home not only a warning, but also, much deeper aspects of the general message I think you convey so well ................................ Seasonal Regards & All Good Things my friend ...

Neville :)