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there was once a girl

once

there was once a girl

there was once a girl 
I fell in love with the first second I laid eyes on her
there was once a girl 
I tried to give everything to even tho it seemed like it wasn't enough
there was once a girl 
that made my heart go wild every time she smiled
there was once a girl 
I used to love  
there was once a girl
that stopped smiling…
Written by a lonly guy

 

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Being Me

Awww... after reading this I really hope she goes back to you x

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Jill Tait

💕❤️💕Awwww man 🌹

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Gwendoline

So sad, I loved that you repeated “There was once” reads like a broken fairytale. Great ink :)

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Mira Singh

I love the repeating of lines. It makes the message sound deeper than it would've originally sounded. Keep writing x

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Stephanie A. Ludwig

Awe. I felt every emotion in this. As I've felt this same way before. I hope you don't feel like this forever. Everyone deserves happiness.

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