Poem -
there was once a girl
once
there was once a girlĀ
I fell in love with the first second I laid eyes on her
there was once a girlĀ
I tried to give everything to even tho it seemed like it wasn't enough
there was once a girlĀ
that made my heart go wild every time she smiled
there was once a girlĀ
I used to loveĀ Ā
there was once a girl
that stopped smilingā¦
Written by a lonly guy
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Comments
Awww... after reading this I really hope she goes back to you x
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So sad, I loved that you repeated āThere was onceā reads like a broken fairytale. Great ink :)
I love the repeating of lines. It makes the message sound deeper than it would've originally sounded. Keep writing x
Awe. I felt every emotion in this. As I've felt this same way before. I hope you don't feel like this forever. Everyone deserves happiness.