Poem -
Those Good Explosions
It is the feelings of high heavens
Sparks fly, fireworks not quite fourth of July,
If lonely heart individually partakes
If love not involved detonation a waste,
Ignition of vision my cock throbs
Starting the clock of internal bombs
At times we work fast, others slow
mouths like magnets fingers to hole,
Seconds to impact and the earth to quake
Lips bitten quiver as bodies shake
Screaming to God does he care for this pleasure
In the brink of combustion were fused together,
With one last moan her arms and legs relax, unfurl
Those good explosions can make your toes curl.
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Comments
Hi Devon . I great write of passion. Being with the write person makes all the difference in the world . Wrapped around my sweetheart there are explosions all the time . Seconds to impact and the earth starts to quake . I say yummy to like Cherie . Cheers on a passionate writeÂ
Appreciate that Hardrock, I completely agree because self explosion just isn't the same I need my love to erupt with me. Cheers and a toast to Love.
jeezzus Devon, I didn't expect this, exceptional erotica brother...I read through my fingers at times (not even kidding lol)  this is really good....animated, fresh original and captivating, I'm trying to remember if I even read an erotic one from you before....that is so cool when a poet puts out something that 'surprises' me like this in a great way...wow my friend....everything here is spectacular, thank you for this!  I'm seriously Impressed!  High Five!!  Favoured,  stars....what else is there?....have great evening,Â
Yo Christopher thanks so much man im answering your comment battling big smiles on my face. I have written some erotic poems in the past buts its been a while and I guess I'm just getting better at it. These types of comments mean so much thanks Christopher
This was absolutely amazing,sweet and sexy....Very hot and spicy. Great write Devon La Porte. Cheers.
Thank you Cleo, sometimes you just have to make it sexy lol. Appreciate the feedback my Love and Respect.