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Thought I Saw Mine

Oh those legs where so nice
Gave me pause to look twice
But on second thought,
I remember what I aught

The smell was divine
Surely it must be mine
But alas, she too passed on
And a new doubt was born

From so far away
That's a woman! come what may
But the ring was so bright
Her form was a delight

At last it happened
My heart was harpooned
Till the bass discovered
And my pride recovered

Yup! I thought I saw mine'
I no longer look to find
Cause sexy is too crazy
One mistake made me lazy!!!

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Tony Taylor

Hi Nathaniel.....this was very interesting to me........I mean, I could relate........it's funny how the heart responds to what the eye see's.......and you convey that so well in this write........compelling my friend.......one thing if you don't mind my asking........"til a base discovered"  (what does "base" mean here, I couldn't figure that out?)......regardless, much enjoyed........well done......tony  xx

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Nathenial Jones

Tony T'......................dont laugh at a brother...go back and look at the poem...again...thanks to you...the miss spelling will adjust your attitude...hehehehe...again...go easy on me...lol...nj

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Tony Taylor

WOW!! Nathaniel!  LOL LOL....I totally did NOT see that coming......that's hysterical    I'm trying to dry my eyes,,.......that's too funny!!........I lone this even MORE........awesome my brother........one little word and the whole thing morphs into something else........LOVE this........well done N!.......smiles.....tony  xx

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Nathenial Jones

Tony T' I have found some women with deeper voices then mine...and want to make me the woman...hehehehe...every thing that looks good...dont come with the right packaging...Word?

peace my brother...go easy on me...smile...nj

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Nathenial Jones

hehehehehehehe....you are a mess Tony T'...hehehehe...nj

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