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thoughts to care.

What would it be like,
in a world that's upside down?
The grass up so high,
The clouds upon the ground,
Where would the birds fly,
Or would they fall?
No knowing how to fly at all?
Would it rain in colours,
From the leaves within the tree's,
Falling down,
Would flowers still grow?
Or tree's stand tall,
Would they drown within the oceans as they cover the ground,
There's something sad and lonely,
Living in a world that's upside down,
Would anything be found?
Would night still be night if the stars bound our feet,
Surrounding us in bright light,
Could we even sleep?
If the sun and the moon were below,
Who would look up high in prayer ,
If nothing beautiful resides up there,
Would it bring, hopelessness, despair?
Would we even have the thoughts to care?

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AUTHOR WILLIAMS...

nardine sanderson,

Good write, My applause, My vote

If the sun and the moon were below,
Who would look up high in prayer ,
If nothing beautiful resides up there,
Would it bring, hopelessness, despair?
Would we even have the thoughts to care?

Love

WILLIAMSJI MAVELI

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Nardine Sanderson

Thank you sir WILLIAMSJI MAVELI, i seem to be in a fair dinkum mood today, much love to you sir xoxo

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Ravindra Kumar

Nice presentation,...reliable questions has put before the world who is still indifferent with the worldly affairs as well as its surroundings,..thank you,

Love & Regards,

Ravindra Kumar

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Georgina Richardson

Can you buy that fair dinkum mood over the counter sweety,??!!!!  as it`s got a great write out of you. Your writing is always superb, but this was very different. This piece had me sat staring into space and trying to visualise your words for ages. I wonder what my dreams will be like tonight!!! I can`t wait for `seepy fies` as my kids used to say when they were tiny!!!! Love you sweety. G xx

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Nardine Sanderson

Haha sweet Georgy girl , i wish i could send you some, my head is flooded in it, no peace in there today, if i could bottle my emotions I'd send them across the sea to thee, love to you precious one xx

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