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Thunder

I can hear it, feel it, shaking the world.

Oh the thunder, how the sound, as it trembles and wakes the ground.

Roll on sweet thunder, roll on.

So much power, oh what a thrill, as I sit and watch, from a house upon a hill. 

I feel you coming, I can hear you roar, I can see your beauty, as your lightning hits the floor.

Roll on, oh thunder roll on, show your beauty, to every one. 

As we count between your roars, we know that all this storm is yours, Lord, to show true power, of your world.

Let the thunder roll on.

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Tony Taylor

Hey MARK!!..... what struck me about this write is the way the flow of the phrasing...... rolls just as thunder would........ you've found a very cool rhythm here...... when you read this aloud it becomes even better...... great word choices..... make great phrases......a gorgeous job ~filled with feeling.......fistful-O-stars!!.......sorry I haven't been around more lately to catch your stuff........this was a pleasure to read!!......T xo  ?✳✴

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Mark Gonzalez

Thank you, those words mean many. Always a pleasure hearing your admiration, thank you again.

~Mark~

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