Poem -
Thy tainted soul.
Sparks flying,
Everywhere,
Oh, thee do,
Change,
The colour of the air,
Thee do,
Ignite,
Thy soul,
Can't fight,
Thine gravity,
Takes hold,
Oh I wish,
To slumber,
Deep,
Only there,
I dare,
Do peep,
So much,
Fire,
This,
Burning desire,
For thee,
Gravity takes,
Hold,
You've,
Always,
Known,
Thy soul,
A,
Lost,
Spark
or flame,
Never did,
Wish to,
Tame,
Vanquish,
Nor name.
For there's,
None,
Like thine,
Thee,
Soul,
Twisted and torn,
Thee never,
Did Morn,
Thine,
Spark,
Finds me,
Always,
At dawn,
Then dusk,
Goes to,
Rest,
Take,
Thy soul,
With the rest.
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Comments
it sounds interesting
whats behind this poem then?
It's about a mans love that's devours your entire soul, no matter how twisted, tainted or broken it is. Two souls finding eachother.
No matter how far they venture they always find there way back " thine, spark, finds me, always, at dawn,"
but really the reader can interprate it anyway they like, that's half the fun. ?
love your 'partial' usage of the 'Shakespearean language' it filled my thoughts with comfort and somehow makes poetry sound more poetic, and I also enjoyed your short sharp dramatic line breaks, I 'suspect' the poet really enjoyed writing this, I 'know' this reader certainly enjoyed reading it, applause to you....cheers poet
Thank you for your lovely feedback, as I have read some of your wonderfully composed poetry I'm honourd that you enjoyed mine thank you again ?
Congrats### I really enjoyed reading this ## you have a unique style!!
xoxo Leah
Thank you Leah, I'm so happy that my poem was revived so positively ?
Thanks for beating my poem! Just kidding! Congrats! Great poem!!
Denise ?
To be honest I didn't think I would, I found your poem beautiful. Thank you ?