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TIC TAC TOE

TIC TAC TOE

So
​​​​​We are animals here we eat our own
Farming fellow species to make our life better 

A slaughterhouse where life is a planetary cage
Like trawling cetaSEAns 
In a feeding frenzy 
Life here means to fight
To survive on the food chain

​​​​To be the top dog 
In scheming self centred unscrupulous plots

Mindsets here are kinda the same 
Living means to live and dying means to die

The game of life is it worth playing?

Tic tac toe the knowledgeable X could win by taking advantage of the unknowingly 0

But

​​​​Eventually know one wins
I'm thinking right now
It's better to not have played
​​​​​Or been born
At all

Or been born
At all.

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Rory McGinlay

Feedback, as you will know the spoken word and music in tandem, very powerful. 

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Marion

I share your sentiments about animals...helpless creatures that we farm abuse cage and chain to sports they have no say in. As soon as one cruelty is abolished another takes its place. I dont eat meat. Fighting the dog / cat meat trade nearly killed me a few years ago. I see they have finally made some headway in Korea. I wish I had been strong enough to continue but the amount of cruelty across all cultures and species overwhelmed me.
The last three lines here
yea...that's me too. x

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Yiyan Han

This 100% applies to the countries or places of 1984.

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sparrowsong

Hello Aaron...

​​​​​​Hello Aaron...

​​​When you see it you'll know you were put here because, you have an Earthly Job to do...

The more trials and tribulations...

The more special you are...

This is where you can choose...

Good or Evil...

Great write!

Great sound...

Thank you for sharing...

sparrowsong

 

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Aaron Phyall

Thankyou all for your comments. I have just changed the verse slightly as I thought it was a bit to deep. 🙏 Aaron 

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Aaron Phyall

TAXATION

We are being taxed/farmed, so some can have a better standard of living? Please look at the below figures:

Today  :

Chickens live for 6 months. That's 5% of their possible natural life span. 😢 

Fish live for 1 year. That's 5% of their possible natural life span. 😢 

Cows live for 2-3 years. That's 10% of their possible natural life span. 😢 

Pigs live for 6 months. That's 3% of their possible natural life span 😢 

Lambs live for 6 months. That's 5% of their possible natural life span 😢 

Mankind lives 80 years. That's 50% of their possible natural life span!  🧐

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