Poem -
TIME
If you love life,don’t waste time,
For time is what life is made out of.
Life is like an army going for war,Â
The more they delay,the more they fall.
The more time you waste,
The more consequences you face.
Life is like a little child that needs attention.
Life needs focus to be in right condition.
Delay is a sharp needle
Which makes human life wiggle,
It puts some people in sorrow,
Because of not preparing for tomorrow;
Everyone needs the best of life,
So, there is a need to strife.
You need to avoid the delay pit,
Our dreams! We have to pursue for it.
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cheers, Emmanuel Garley,  this poem reads very well, has superb flow and really good intelligence, the language puts the reader in a good comfort space ....you show excellent instincts with the rhyming schemes here, and stay consistent ...  this poem should be read out loud with dramatic emphasis, makes it much more lively.... tone has credibility as well, all around terrific poem, enjoyed  Â
Delay is a sharp needle
Which makes human life wiggle,
It puts some people in sorrow,
Because of not preparing for tomorrow;
Thanks Christopher
Very much appreciate your comment