" TIME TO DIE "

If the Lord is not moved by that brilliantly crafted prayer than he is not paying attention ;) 

I have missed reading your powerful poetry! I really love this line...it stood out to me...

Whose sinful fall has split us all

Val ♥️

Fabulous write dear Poet Tony Taylor, my applause, my love, my vote

I wish to become the light, on the other side
Where life becomes the dream
Where blood is quantum love, and thoughts angelic doves
And nothing is as it seems
Where we are understanding, and God does the planning
So I can finally find that sleep
Filled with blissfulness, without life's painfulness
Where ALL, is precisely as it should be......

Love & hugs

WILLIAMSJI MAVELI

Wow bro, just wow, love this piece immensely
"I wish to sleep, a long dark sleep
Where there has never been
Such a silence, devoid of violence
Haunted by my every sin"
what a grand opening line, holy moly :)
"Oh great creator, what in our nature
So depraved and deathly forlorn
Haunt's my ugly sleep, where I fight to keep
The baby smell with which I was born..."
priceless ^^ and what a precious smell a newborn baby has
to enter a heart completely, taking everything destructive away,

"I need to dream, a most irreverent dream
In deaths most mystical rest"
~ for dreams within much love, hold no aching
nor fear at heart,

"Whose sinful fall has split us all
Into this troubled trespass"

"Where man's duality, is woven by it's seams
And sex woven into it's twist
Where innate procreation, pains my soulful aching
And my bid for God's congress...."

"I wish to become the light, on the other side
Where life becomes the dream"
powerful words bro, just wow :)

"Where life becomes the dream
Where blood is quantum love, and thoughts angelic doves
And nothing is as it seems"
such light exists within every being,its self,if searched
and reached the connection, which i truly believe you have in this write
come closer than ever before

"Where we are understanding, and God does the planning
So I can finally find that sleep"
the burial of sins , the honourable sacrifice of
gods love,
"Filled with blissfulness, without life's painfulness
Where ALL, is precisely as it should be......"
within the arms of the lord, you shall witness strength abode weakness
releasing pain for pleasure
~ a pleasure reading this indeed, love you bro
always your sis nardine xoxo

You will build your own world of heart's tony~
if you stay true to the innocence of you.

Where blood is quantum love, and thoughts angelic doves

fav. part of the whole writing! nothing else i can say that has not already been so eloquently put ..cheers!

Wow what a beautiful poetic rhyme you share in this write. I admire the way it just flows, so evenly throughout. It is almost depressing, but on the other hand you have this thing going.That inspires us not to give up faith. We are all numbers my friend, and our number is only called when our duty is filled. Sometimes it is so tough though!! With all the nasty crap going on in today's world, I anyways, wonder if it is really worth the fight, too. But, as you said. One day everything will be just as it should be. My applause Tony. Looking forward to seeing more :)

Sincerely

XxX Melissa <3