The Time to End Our Time

In shops we see the slogans “when it’s gone its gone”
And this is true of human life; a fact that seems so wrong
Of course ,the only certain things are birth and death we’re taught
And maybe we’ll be proud of all the battles that we fought
Maybe all this time you had been lacking in self worth
Maybe it’s a feeling you’d developed since your birth
It could be that you wanted this and were waiting for the day
But it’s likely it was too soon: did it have to end this way?
When you recollect all those experiences you had
You realise of your actions some were good and some were bad
You think “Maybe I deserved this” you think “maybe I did not”
And after all our lives are through we’re all reduced to rot
It seems as though we’re all just being punished for our crimes
And this is why we’re faced with the time to end our times
Perhaps it was just natural perhaps something is to blame
But when we leave this world it always seems a shame
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very nice congrats x
thank you for the comment and congratulation
good stuff, its deep
thankyou . the comment is much appreciated
Gooooooood shit! Very nice piece here. Read it twice lolÂ
thankyou for the compliment and comment. this has been better received than I thought it would
This is a thought-provoking poem. I like the flow of it; that it isn't defined in a rigid structure but rather as a stream of consciousness, and your use of dialogue draws the reader in really well. Great job. :)