Time stood still
I stand,
In grace,
Before land,
Embraced,
In awe,
Of all,
Before,
I fall,
Lured,
By light,
Flawed,
In flight,
I rise,
Adrift,
Sunrise,
In rift.
Across breadth of saplings and mountain terrain,
I leave behind all my possessions & pain.
Memories unfold, I take view of my life,
Part of my soul is my children & wife.
I took most of my chances and danced in the rain,
Regrets not worth mulling, burdens now wane,
Such grandeur I missed, I took too much time,
Dreaming of life instead of taking what's mine.
And now,
I fly,
The how,
The why,
Will soon,
Bestow,
Croon,
The know,
A kiss,
For thee,
Bliss,
For me,
Time,
Stands still,
You'll find,
The will.
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Comments
Simon this is a brilliant clever piece of writing. Love the way you sectioned in 3 parts of your storytelling like beginning middle end and the indent on the first and third part. Flowed so good and proper enjoyed it. Sssoo pinned this end of life poem ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐
P x
Thank you so very much. What an awesome comment from a very talented writer. ?
You are welcome. I love playing with text layout like you have! It's so much fun! I've done it a few times on writing ?
Hello SIMON!!…..there's a lot going on here....I really like the way you played with your formatting......and the way it helps the flow of the read itself.....like it's flowing down hill as you read it kinda thing!!…..Some stellar phrasing that REALLY stood out for me ~
~ "Such grandeur I missed, I took too much time
Dreaming of life instead of taking what's mine.."
Wow!! SOOO VERY insightful...and sad in retrospect!!….Love it!!…..ALL STARS!!…..VERY original my friend!!…….LOVE & ROCKETS!!…..T xo : )
Thank you Tony thought i would try something a little different I am so glad you liked it, always respect your views ?
Yes I luvit Pinned for perfection ❤️?❤️
Thank you so much Jill ??
Simon, wow! I love this! I love the way it flows...like silk...all the way through. The rhyme enhances and it does so gently and unobtrusively so that the poem is not stilted. The rhyming is not in your face. This is really great work! It totally deserves the 5 stars I am giving it ... and I am also pinning it. Very, very well done x
Thank you so much for your praise and comments i really appreciate it
Better poets than me have already commented. A well-written, well-constructed and enjoyable read.
Thank you my friend but never put yourself down. I truly appreciate your support.
superb my poet friend. sorry for the delay with our writing collab. finally finished.
Thank you Lisa look forward to seeing it posted.
Absolutely bloody stunning...and pinned ?
Thank you Marion ?
My Dear Friend Simon,
Another brilliant work, using the five senses of the Soul, acceptance, analysis, death, life, and love, to illustrate it.
All my love,
Larry xxx