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‘‘Tis as if

Oh my dear
You cry so loud 
You weep so hard 
Is that blood in your eyes
My God the way you are 
‘Tis as if the sun won’t set

Heh! My dear
So he left you
So he beat you
Are those scars on your back 
Virgin mother! The way you lived 
Tis as if you had no kin

Sheh! My dear
You still love him
You still want him
Is that a letter in your hands
Lord save our souls! The way you love
Tis as if there’s one fish in the see

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Tony Taylor

Hello ADAM!!......I like what you've done here in the formatting and use of repetition as a poetic tool!!..... Conveying the misery involved in a strained relationship!!......ALL STARS!!.... well done... and.....WELCOME to COSMO!!.....LOVE and ROCKETS!!......T xo

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