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sparrowsong

Hello Lorris...

Before we begin our day...

We should ask to be shown someone we can be a blessing to...

Not just be kinder forΒ a season, but all year through...

Some people will be very happy to have you there even if it's for just a moment...

Great write indeed!

Thank you for sharing...

Hugs...

sparrowsongΒ 

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Deborah Evans

Hi Lorris AΒ heartfelt write kindness costs nothing
Β you have written this so poignantly IΒ felt every word
Congrats on the nomination in the contest a good choice
Great write!
Best wishes DebsΒ 
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