Poem - 06 September 2018, 03:51

TO CAROLINE...

Take me to Caroline, please...
Only for Caroline, please...

Caroline, Caroline, Caroline my dear
Are we not there yet? I think we are
Right here and now is where we belong, together
Our very own place, as I have promised
Lovely and rosy your lips part
In sighs alone, it breath'd my name...
Now for you to be mine, alone
Escape with me to a place of our own
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zZzleepy06 September 2018, 03:59

Inspiration from 'To Caroline' by Lord Byron

"...but I love the poetry of Caroline..."
~ Katherine Pierce

lodigiana06 September 2018, 06:52

Hi Love a good Acrostic! dont often see too many differing genres of poetry so reading your piece made me very happy! nice work
Lodigiana xx

zZzleepy06 September 2018, 19:34

Thanks so much for your lovely comment Lodigiana!! I love trying different poem types..hehehe. Acrostics is deffinitely one of my faves at the moment.
thanks again for reading and I'm very glad it made you happy X)

LULU KING06 September 2018, 18:34

HEHE! This piece is different from the other pieces you've shared :)
I really like this line

Now for you to be mine, alone
Escape with me to a place of our own

zZzleepy06 September 2018, 19:38

Have someone special in mind?? Hehehehe. Thanks for reading girlfriend ???. Kinda felt like I rushed the ending but oh well...What's done is done ????