Poem - 11 April 2017, 01:37 Too far gone Yashika Smith He goes deep hoping to find you He's trying to be your hero He didn't think he'd drown too YRS Like 3 Pin it 0 Support CosmoFunnel.com You can help support the upkeep of CosmoFunnel.com via PayPal. Views: 622 Rating: Total votes: 4 Tags: Depth Sacrifice Surrender Tragedy Poetry Genre: Freestyle Tragedy Topic: Passion Listed in: Contest Entries 4 comments
Tony Taylor11 April 2017, 07:01 LOL!!...... this really made me laugh YASHIKA!!.......I know you intended this as a tragedy...... but if you look hard  enough there is humor as well.......ALL STARS!!....... cool stuff!!.......LOVE and ROCKETS!!.......T xo. ?âłâ´â Reply
Yashika Smith11 April 2017, 07:43 Thanks for putting a smile on my face, Tony. You are love. XX, YRS Reply
Jason Brown18 April 2017, 10:57 sage advice from Mom never lose your head over a pair of dark eyes J ;) Reply
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LOL!!...... this really made me laugh YASHIKA!!.......I know you intended this as a tragedy...... but if you look hard  enough there is humor as well.......ALL STARS!!....... cool stuff!!.......LOVE and ROCKETS!!.......T xo. ?âłâ´â
Thanks for putting a smile on my face, Tony.
You are love.
XX,
YRS
sage advice from Mom
never lose your head over
a pair of dark eyes
J ;)
Intelligent Mom!
You are love, J!
XX,
YRS