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HAIKU

HAIKU

Time is running out

I can sense the urgency

Too late - you lost me 

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Valerie Lynn

Aww thank you so much! It was my first attempt at writing one :)

♥ Val

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AUTHOR WILLIAMS...

Valerie Lynn,

Fist attempt, Good Haiku, I have nearly a thousand, awaiting posting.

Regards

WILLIAMSJI MAVELI

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Valerie Lynn

Thank you WILLIAMSJI MAVELI!!! I can't wait to read some of yours!

♥ Val

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Jimmy Arnold

Wow Val,

A powerful Haiku.....A poem of very few words but the meaning and mind set, in which it was written and presented to your many followers speaks of so many volumes and languages on why it was written....First one written but many more hopefully to come.....Excellent job Valerie...Sir Williamjl, is a force to be reckoned with and a poet and commenter, in his own league....

Warmest regards,

Jim 

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Valerie Lynn

Thank you Jim! I think both of you are amazing poets! It will be a challenge for me to keep up the pace with how much y'all write. I'm going to do my best and keep trying different styles of poems. Thank you so much for your heartfelt comment. 

Love Always,

Val ♥

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Valerie Lynn

Thank you Jim! I think both of you are amazing poets! It will be a challenge for me to keep up the pace with how much y'all write. I'm going to do my best and keep trying different styles of poems. Thank you so much for your heartfelt comment. 

Love Always,

Val ♥

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Jason Luke

Well written. I really enjoyed this work. 

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Linda Hope

Great Haiku!!  Your first one and what a poem hitting the mark

And I have to say it is their loss, you are a cutie

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Valerie Lynn

Haha aww thank you for the comment!

Val <3

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Valerie Lynn

Aww thank you so much!!! I loved your comment. So true!

Val ♥

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Anthony Lane

First time? Beginners luck...I think not, just a talent for writing and putting feeling into the write! Good job, Anthony

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Valerie Lynn

Aww thank you so much Anthony! Your comment was very sweet and made me smile. :)

Val <3

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Owais Ahmad

meaningful Haiku, good job dear Valerie.

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Valerie Lynn

Aww thank you so much!!! I appreciate you taking the time to read and leave me a comment.  :)

Val <3

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