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Too Long In the Tooth

Looking back
at what the future
might hold
for us both, I note
there was
something wrong
after all,
wasn’t there  ..
I could feel it in
the tone of your
broken voice ..
So pray tell, how
are you here now ..
Since I was told
you died long ago ..
Some time
after we parted,
but before
we had said all our
final goodbyes ..
And although we
each have the same
journey to take,
then let this be my
solemn
and eternal truth ..
While I am
so very desperate
for a closure babe ..
I am now,
too long in the tooth ..

 

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janie18

loved reading it neville 

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Neville

I loved you reading it janie, thank you so much.. wishing you all good things, Neville

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Marion

Ghosts ( living or dead) can be really annoying but nothing can stop them worrying away at us like toothache ...
at least when they are dead one has one's god to complain to...hugs x
 

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Neville

No matter how hard it gets .. or tough .. I don't think I could bare to bother her .. god that is .. Cheers our M .. Neville x

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Marion

Yea...you're probably right
she probably has enough of her own problems with Mr god 🙃🙃🤩

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Neville

not to mention their 8.1 billion kids xx

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Marion

Lol...imagine!!! That's a lot of whinging...poor bastards  😆😆😆 x

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