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TOOK YOU INSTEAD

TOOK YOU INSTEAD

I should’ve died but it wasn’t my time.
I could’ve died but he spared my life.
No I am not lucky but worthy and blessed.
 Yes! I am thankful to stand on this earth.
Should’ve! could’ve! would’ve! Been me.
But he took you instead, I miss you every day my twin.
                     What?   Why?    Who?
Are questions I’ve asked repeatedly but who am I to question faith, hope and destiny.
A path we all have a role to play.
I am only human but aren’t we all?
Missing you bro.
Only time will tell.
 

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Tony Taylor

Hey OPAL!!..... this is powerful in so many ways.....I think, for me, it was the subtle manner in which you delivered your poetic prose here that struck me the most!!......a beautifully delivered remembrance dear poet!!......ALL STARS!!..... well done......LOVE and ROCKETS!!.......T xo ?✳✴☀♥?

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